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The snow and ice
crunches under our feet
as we rush,
gathering against the building.

I hear someone ask
What happened?

Our Beloved Sister
fell down the stairs–
a shelless turtle, wrinkled
and helpless, slipped off of
a mossy log
–off a stair
wet with ice.

Pulled out on the stretcher,
back into her shell
with the red lights flashing.
©2007-2008 ~RustyGonzo
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Just a childhood memory.
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~Mystrel:iconMystrel: Oct 14, 2007, 6:34:48 PM
I like. It flows really nicely
~RustyGonzo:iconRustyGonzo: Oct 16, 2007, 6:46:08 PM
Oh thanks.

It's sort of my first real poem.

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Could it be seen; caught in the eye.

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